Tuesday, 3 March 2015

My advice blog

WALT: Look beyond the text.

our task was to write on our advice blog  and offer adive to mr anderson


Waltwrite a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Dirty, yuck ,ugly and smelly that's what our creek is. Can you believe that people were swimming in it in the olden days, we went to the river talks,to see how GI to help it be clean again.Do you know how we can help Omaru creek?

Today we had to write a introduction starting with a simple sentence , complex sentence and a question