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Friday, 14 April 2017

my favourite pastime



In this blog post i had to explain what was my favourite pastime is and is that my favourite pastime.

Thursday, 22 October 2015

San diego Zoo

WAlT:  think about my purpose and reader by planning my recount.

  We had a virtual tour of the San Diego zoo. San Diego zoo has lots of cool animals.
I like cheetahs and beavers I also like elephants. But my personal favorite is a komodo dragon, did you know dragons are real ?

Wednesday, 5 August 2015

my conjunctions


WALT: conjunctions and how to use them in sentences.

task 1
  • We went home and went straight to bed.

  • They are rich but they aren’t happy.

  • We went home because we were tired.

  • We went home early, so we missed the end of the concert.

  • We went home when Jane wanted to.

  • We went home before the concert ended.

  • We went home after Max Jones had sung his first song

  • We went home although / though we did not really want to.
task 2
We will go home if we are tired.

Gene can go to school unless its raining
Lena has a sore foot while playing rugby
Katarina won't be going to the movie since she grounded  


Sione can ride his bike only if he does his dishes


Sally climbed a tree after playing in the mud


Kyle walked home from school after riverside


Simon was full from dinner although he wants some more


Anna watched her sister but she wasn't really good at it
Scott was in charge if he was being good

Shelley played ripper rugby  because she's fast


our task was to learn what conjunctions are and how to use them in sentences.  task 1 we had to find out which word is a conjunction and colour it red. for our second task we had to write a conjunction and finish off the sentence .

Tuesday, 30 June 2015

super powers

WALT:use juice vocabulary

If I had a superpower I  will have the ability to shapeshift. Shapeshifting is a super power that lets you turn into any human animal and many more living creatures. Illd like this power because if you are late for school i can turn into flash and get to school super fast.  
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I think that these super powers would be great for doing the dishes super fast, turning invisible during  hide and seek . Terrerfing  people by turning into John Cena.It will also be great for turning into Usian bolt and winning every race.  
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our task ask as to write effected paragraphs About super powers.
My super power was shape shifting.My character was from X Men

Wednesday, 27 May 2015

Mr Wiseman's new born baby


Walt: write a lead paragraph of a news report
In Auckland New zealand at pt england school Mr
wiseman year 7 and 8  has been away for a very long time.
because of the amazing news of his new born baby  Ailah  (the spelling is unsure) .

term twos immersion assembly

Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.
Have you ever seen your teacher on a hovercraft ? Well on the first day back from the holidays In our immersion assembly. Mr Sommerville had rode around on a homemade hovercraft.this is what happen.


The first thing that we did was line up and walk over to the hall, while our class was  standing  there we saw all the other classes  sitting up and getting sandwiches, cookies and carrot sticks  .Can You imagine that . Have you ever got free food at school before?


After everyone was settled down Mr Burt
told us what the topic was, and what it was about. Then team 1 did there item about eating healthy and keeping it clean.

Overall my thoughts of the assembly was great it made me feel pumped and ready for this years topic.

Wednesday, 20 May 2015

word classes

WALT:We are learning how identify different word classes using pictures

Today our task was in room six literacy we learnt how to identify different word classes and  I learnt what a determiner is do you know your word classes ?  

Tuesday, 3 March 2015

Omaru

Walt: write a detailed introduction with hook and orientation.

Dirty, yuck ,ugly and smelly that's what our creek is. Can you believe that people were swimming in it in the olden days, we went to the river talks,to see how GI to help it be clean again.Do you know how we can help Omaru creek?



Today we had to write a introduction starting with a simple sentence , complex sentence and a question