Screaming and shouting was the only thing that you could hear in living room. It was so exciting my heart was beating so fast it felt like my it was going to fall out of my chest. We all gathered in front of the T.V watching the warriors and the broncos Nrl finals.
Yeah!! everyone excited that Roger Tuivasa-Sheck had intercepted the ball during a pass the ball. Uncle sam screamed “run Roger run like the wind” like Roger could hear him. Roger ran straight and the fullback came right towards him going for the tackle. The fullback darius had ran and tried going for the tackle but Rogers shoulders were too strong and bumped him off. Me and my whole family shouted smash him bro. Roger scored right between the goal post . the 80 minute hooter rang and the game was over. The Vodafone Warriors won the world cup against the broncos.
Nice work Angelo you got good language features like Metaphors and how your whole family were all gathered around the T.V
ReplyDeleteGood job man! I like how you made the story awesome with your words. keep it up! (:
ReplyDeleteGood job man! I like how you made the story awesome with your words. keep it up! (:
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